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@@ -370,26 +370,43 @@ Every suite runs the actual script, not a reimplementation of its logic, and
 every fix scenario is paired with a control that reproduces the bug — a
 scenario that passes either way proves nothing.
 
-The concurrency scenarios run the real scripts as real concurrent processes,
-but they never race for the interleaving. The interfering step is placed
-inside the window by stubbing, on `PATH`, a command the code under test calls
-at a known point: `prune-cache-selftest.sh` scenario 12 stubs `du`, so the
-pass's own measurement publishes a reader marker strictly between its check
-and its unlink; `seed-target-dir-selftest.sh` scenarios 8a and 8b stub `cp`,
-so the consumer's own clone is what rotates the snapshot underneath it, or
-what loses a subtree of its own source, strictly inside the identity window.
-Placement is then a fact rather than a scheduling outcome — and each stub
-asserts that it fired, because a scenario whose interference silently did not
-happen passes for the wrong reason.
+The concurrency scenarios take one of three shapes, and none of them races
+for the interleaving its assertion depends on.
+
+**A genuine race whose asserted invariant holds under any interleaving.**
+`seed-target-dir-selftest.sh` scenario 7 starts two real seeds on one cache
+key and asserts only what must be true whichever of them wins the rename.
+
+**A `PATH` stub on a command the code under test calls at a known point**,
+which places the interference inside the window rather than hoping it lands
+there. `prune-cache-selftest.sh` scenario 12 stubs `du`, so the pass's own
+measurement publishes a reader marker strictly between its check and its
+unlink; `seed-target-dir-selftest.sh` scenarios 8a and 8b stub `cp`, so the
+consumer's own clone is what rotates the snapshot underneath it, or what
+loses a subtree of its own source, strictly inside the identity window. 8a
+does start a second real process — the actual `publish-snapshot.sh` — but the
+stub is what fixes where its swap lands; the concurrency is incidental to the
+determinism. Every stub asserts that it fired, because a scenario whose
+interference silently did not happen passes for the wrong reason.
+
+**A synthetic stand-in for the other side, where that artefact *is* the
+contract.** `publish-snapshot-selftest.sh` scenarios 6 to 8 hold a
+`.reading-*` marker instead of running a slow consumer: the marker is the
+whole agreement between reader and publisher, so holding one is being a
+reader, and racing a real one would make the suite's runtime the thing under
+test.
 
 Gating the interfering step on *observed progress* of the step it interferes
-with was the earlier answer here, and it is not one: seeing that a walk has
+with was an earlier answer here, and it is not one: seeing that a walk has
 started says nothing about where it will be when the interference lands, so
-the assertion downstream held only some of the time (issue #3).
+the assertion downstream held only some of the time (issue #3). No scenario
+does it any more.
 
-Where more than one guard could catch a fault, the scenario asserts *which*
-one did — otherwise deleting the guard under test leaves the suite green
-because a sibling fires in its place.
+Where more than one guard could catch a fault, a scenario should assert
+*which* one did — otherwise deleting the guard under test leaves the suite
+green because a sibling fires in its place. Scenarios 8a and 8b of the seed
+suite do; scenario 9 of the same suite does not yet, which is why a mutation
+survives it (issue #5).
 
 The action YAML holds no logic beyond wiring; everything testable lives in
 `scripts/`. A composite action needs `shell: bash` on every `run:` step, and